Hello! James and I are planning to release another individual short story in April entitled “Television’s Prescription for Ratings”. This is the second of many stand alone shorts from the Dystopian Nation of City-State. This piece is around 7,200 words. These shorts are loosely connected with our current publication, The Dystopian Nation of City-State: An Anthology.
To properly plan for the upcoming release, we would love for a handful of readers to read this short piece and provide feedback regarding plot/storyline, coherence, flow, character development, reader intrigue, and any other elements that stand out.
“Television’s Prescription for Ratings” is a piece that centers around the unpredictable, somewhat senseless world of reality television. In City-State, entertainment is controlled by the government. Here, Dr. Tyler Wright is appointed to the so-called “death committee” immediately after medical school. He is pressured to follow the rules and the procedures of the committee, his superiors, and the show’s deadly scripts.
This reality show, “The Blade’s Edge: Family Edition”, features contestants who are deemed “too expensive to save” per City-State’s StarChild Act. The contestants are slated to die anyway, so the government – this committee in particular – give them a chance to entertain the nation. Hey, this is a dystopian universe – a terrifying view on what the future could hold.
If you would like to participate, please comment below with your email address or message me on Twitter or Facebook. I will contact you later this month with all of the details.
You will receive the story free of charge, and James and I will provide you with ample time to read and provide comments. James and I take beta reading very seriously. We love to hear honest feedback about our works. This only helps City-State grow!
When the formal release date approaches (we are still locking in a release date), and this story is complete, James and I will extend another invitation for reviews to be posted on Amazon and Goodreads (and blog posts).
Thanks! Please let us know if you like to participate.
I can beta read for you 🙂
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Nice! 🙂 May I please have your email address? If you don’t want to put it here, you can message it to me via Twitter or Facebook.
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You’re awesome! I will contact you later this month! 🙂
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Josh.jewison@googlemail.com
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Thanks, Josh! 🙂 Is your address gmail or googlemail? I am assuming the address is @gmail
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Both work the same 😉
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Great! Just checking! Talk to you soon! 🙂
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You know I will :). Can’t wait. I believe you already have my email address.
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Yes! AND… you are already on my list! Thank you so much! I will contact you later this month! This story is around 7,200 words… 🙂
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Hi Kaisy
I enjoyed reviewing ‘How To Kill Your Senator’ and i am currently reading your Anthology (and enjoying it) so i would love to review your new short story ‘Televisions Prescription For Ratings’. My email address is neiljbeattie@gmail.com . Am i ok to mention it on my blog or wait for the release date ?
Thanks in advance
Neil Beattie
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Very cool! Awesome! James and I really appreciate your time! Yes, I have your email, I placed you on my list, and I will contact you later this month.
We are glad that you are enjoying the anthology! 🙂 Have a wonderful day!
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I would be very happy to beta read for you – I’m a big believer in beta reading as well 🙂 My email address is HelenJ0303@gmail.com.
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Awesome! Thank you so much! I will contact you with all of the details later in the month. 🙂
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Dmarieprokop@gmail.com
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Great! Thanks! I will be in touch! 🙂
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Reblogged this on Books and More.
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Thanks for the reblog! Much love! 🙂
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Hey, I’d love to participate! My email address is: supplementalemail@yahoo.com
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Great! I will contact you later this month! 🙂
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I’m interested. jim.belton@gmail.com
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Great! I will contact you soon! 😃
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I’m looking forward to see the final product now.
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Happy to help alexahhill@sky.com
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Awesome! I will contact you soon! Thanks! 🙂
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I’ll help if you still need beta readers.
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Yes! We would love your help! May I have you email address? Or is it the outlook.com address posted?
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If you need a medical perspective, I’m happy to help (I think you may have seen a recent one of my posts..)
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Sure! That sounds great! My hubby is a nurse, so he helps me a bit, but another view would be great! There isn’t a ton of medical references, but we would love to hear your input. May I have your email address?
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It sounds like an interesting project anyway medical or not! The best address is: ivadelondres@gmail.com
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Awesome! I will put you on my list! I will contact you at the end of the week! Thank you so much! 😊😊😊
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Sounds fun! Can I play?
jenn at jennifermack.net
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Awesome! You are on my list! I am going to send everything out this weekend! 😊
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I would be happy to help if you still have a need – markwschutter@gmail.com or @MWSchutter on Twitter. Thanks!
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Yes! Thanks! I will contact you later this week! 😊
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Thanks for being one of my followers! 🙂 To show my appreciation, I’ve nominated you for the Disney Song Tag. Have a look over here: https://victoriajaynesbooks.wordpress.com/2015/03/11/disney-song-tag/
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Great job, friends! Thank you for following “Happiness is so chic!”, Celeste
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Hi! I would love to participate if you would have me.
oohamita@gmail.com
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Awesome! Thanks! I will send out the info this weekend! 😊
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I’m definitely interested, it sounds so cool!
My email is: charleyshelley1@gmail.com
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Got it! I will email the info this weekend! 😊
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I would love to beta read for you!
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This would be great! We are totally revamping the story. It is will be ready in about two weeks. Is that cool?
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Absolutely just send me an email if you need any of my info nerdigirlbooks@gmail.com
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Nerdigirlbooks@gmail.com
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