Hello! Greetings from the treacherous land of editing – the land of frustration, chaos, and repetitive language.
James and I are working on our short story entitled “Prescription for Ratings: The Committee”. This is the somewhat sequel to our latest short story, “Prescription for Ratings: The Contestants” (available on Amazon).
While I was editing, I wanted to repeat some information from “Contestants” as a bridge/connector to “Committee”. I seem repetitive. I sound repetitive. I feel repetitive. Well, I have read this piece a thousand times. Now that’s repetitive.
But – – – It’s really not that significant. I don’t think readers will go back to “Contestants” and take time to pick out the repetitive parts of this first piece. “Committee” is moving into a complex, horrific plot that outlines the sick wonderland of City-State’s entertainment programming controlled by the government.
And repeated… and reblogged…